I agree.
While the introduction is engaging (and an interesting subject matter) it may not appeal to the markers. Just hammer the concept of belonging a bit more and consider in some shape or form making the story personal.
Studies of Relgion 2
Biology
English standard
Visual arts
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Aim: 85 + to get into Psychology at mac
(this is the last hurdle) happy studying and remember to take study breaks! :)
Is this like picking up, or just a "friendly" chat ;)
but yeah...Majority of women do. Allot are flattered even.
Only thing is, us girls tend to be clustered in a group allot when out, making it harder to be approached.
Kudos to men who do it.
I'm in the same situation as you and I would strongly advise you do past papers and send them to you're teachers (maybe it's a little late for you but you can do that for HSC), and in each of your subjects make ONE summary page that encapsulates the whole topic (it should be really brief, these...