The black and white simply shows formality and what society considers normal. Meaning a loss of identity due to conformism. Whereas the colour shows the break, creativity, a sense of identity, what some would call abnormalities which can really be for the better. It shows what someone truly is...
That's fine, but in any story if you wish to gain a high mark, it would be a good idea to follow what Aristotle has written and those rules maybe even bend them a little like Shakespeare, simply modernise it all. But from my view I like that idea, it seems rather creative if used correctly there...
It can be rather helpful if you make the way you write and speak practically habitual. It can all be possible as long as you understand your content to a certain depth but, keep in mind that it is English. A simple spelling error or grammar mistake can get in the way of the mark you wish for. If...