how much do we have to write for crime??? (1 Viewer)

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how much do we need to write for crime? how many paragraphs??
 

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my teacher says because its only 15 marks you could get away with 2, is that right?
i did two body topics but broke it up into separate paragraphs for ease of understanding instead of each paragraph taking up pages and pages (i think i had 6 in total but they were fairly small).
 
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i did two body topics but broke it up into separate paragraphs for ease of understanding instead of each paragraph taking up pages and pages (i think i had 6 in total but they were fairly small).
But how did you separate up the paragraph? Like effectiveness and then ineffectiveness?
 

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But how did you separate up the paragraph? Like effectiveness and then ineffectiveness?
eg. if the question was about CJS, then id mostly have 2 big topics to talk about: criminal investigation process + sentencing and punishment.

CIP: para 1) police powers. para 2) bail. optional para 3) use of technology when investigating eg. sniffer dogs or search and seizure

Sent. + Punish: para 1) rehab case and use of alternative punishment eg. youth koori court. para 2) role of victim in sentencing (victim statements). para 3) post-sentencing considerations

each para is kinda small tho so its not too overwhelming, and id make sure that the first sentence of each para adheres to the 1st or 2nd topic im talking abt. in my intro id define CJS, state that ill be focusing on CIP (police powers + bail + technology) and Sent. (alternative sentencing, victim roles and post-sentencing considerations).
 

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