Full Marks Narrative + Justification

I typed up my response to the CSSA trial which received 20 for Mod C, correcting grammatical mistakes. Note that in the exam, I squeezed out 5-10 minutes extra for Mod C so that is why I could write nearly 1200 words and I do believe the volume that I wrote did in some ways contribute to the high mark. The comment the marker had to improve the response was:

Part A: You may consider integrating the stimulus earlier or foreshadowing its significance earlier in the piece. No negative comments for Part B.