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Ok well I've got some real good ideas for the story now. Pretty much changing the storyboard and ending. Thanks everyone

Yer online joys.... I have tried writing in a time limit and it pretty much filled the time exactly, maybe a little under. I might develop the concept of two species unable to live in harmony a bit more and perhaps change the ending, everything always dies off at the end.

Ok, I'll think I'll add a bit more excitement and get rid of all the boring bits. Also, do you think its too short??

hahah very funny hardcore idiot, but its mine

Keep in mind I am in standard, but I totally understand what your all trying to say. I don't really think I have time to make a whole new story, so if I make it more descriptive do you think I have a better chance of getting a higher mark??

Part of it was, I just adapted my story from my trials - stimulus was about a cottage or something but I left that out. I suppose its kinda ordinary. I scored 9/15 for this.

Loads of people put up there stories anyway. I'll delete it soon, just need some critics.

You serious?? People are so sad as to steal it??

Got all the insight I need for now, thanks.

Hi, I am applying to universities this year to be a vet, but i need to complete a questionnaire first. I am having a little trouble understanding one of the questions and would like someone to help me out - this does not mean do the question for me, just explain what it is asking and perhaps...

Hi, I was just doing a chem questions and I have no idea how to find out whether the isotopes are beta emitters or not and whether they are stable. So, out of the following which are stable and which are beta emitters?? Neon-24 (10), Barium - 138 (56), Calcium - 49 (20), Lead - 212 (82)...

Yes I though water was polar as well.... Anyway, thank you so much Pwnage101 that makes sense. So the alcohol is able to interact with the alkanes through the dispersion forces, which is something that water cannot do since it doesn't have dispersion forces.

What I don't understand is that both water and alcohols have hydrogen bonding and dipole-dipole, so why is it that alkanes are soluble in alcohols but not water. Does it have something to do with the carbon atoms??