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    Othello, Appearance vs. Reality

    Thanks ^^
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    Othello, Appearance vs. Reality

    Hey, anyone have any helpful notes on the theme of Appearance vs. Reality in the play Othello? Anything will be much appreciated, thanks!!
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    Someone smart please fix my creative??

    You'd be marked on mainly technique and structure. It just needs fixing up in places, a few more adjustments. Don't make the protagonist tell the story, YOU should be telling the story and create the environment/atmosphere. Everything he says are supposedly his thoughts. Thats what I meant by...
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    Does anyone else suffer this?

    It's true, a lot of the people who don't do society and culture automatically make assumptions about the subject being easy or what not. Although, that's really the situation with every subject. 2U Math isn't just formulas, it's a whole lot more. My society teacher told the class to be in S&C...
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    Congratulations to the Top 10 Achievers

    Rosebay is a public school, I go there lol. The name is just misleading
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    Sexual Fantasy

    Being your derivative.. so I could lie tangent to your curves
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    Someone smart please fix my creative??

    It sounds like an over-extended soliliquy. When I read just a few sentences of each paragraph it seems to drag on about the protagonist's thoughts. It should be "creative" rather than "descriptive". I know it is good to use imagery sometimes but you seem to have used too many adjectives...
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    Subject Selection for Yr 12

    Subject hmm.. English Advanced English Ext 2 Chemistry (Probably gonna drop) Business Studies Society and Culture 2U Math eep ><
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