I'm Cheating
Ok honestly i considered putting my MW up in the showcase thingy but there is about 18 pages with lots of stories and as ive watied this long to post mine up, it will most likely not get read. so im gunna post it here seeing as i really want some feedback outside of teachers and...
hahah yes ekoolish or whatever ur name was for ripping into the dude.
<3 my idol.. finishing touches of reflection now. so like.. tense...
the theme to my life atm is that music where the joker is around in the dark knight... if u kno what i mean;)
lol at tightass...
Dont be difficult. Its much easier to read single sided, dont have to keep turning pages over and back., dont get that thing where u can kinda see the words on the other side and it makes reading more difficult.
Id say u wanna give the markers as little stress as possible...
LOL.
hes just trying 2 help dude chill out.
i do agree with him however... i realise u say ur trying 2 have no character development but better be able 2 justify that really well:) which im sure u have thought of. out of interest whats it about?
What's the title of your story? Dosn't have one atm im open for suggestions:P,
2. What's the name of one of the main characters? Protagonist (how original) and Delilah
3. Is/are they guys/girls? main characters 1 Girl 2 Guys
4. What is one setting/location? SALLOWAY!!!! YEAA BOY (so bored)...
yeaaaa pretty much done my major work (ss) just given 5 copies of 3rd draft out 2 ppl to see what they think gunna get feedback and make minor changes accordingly.
done a really crappy 1900 word reflection, 1500 words isnt enough! and now im trying 2 make it sound smart.
whats ur mw...