advice on english presentation (1 Viewer)

[jane1820]

bg info:
i've written a short story abt a mentally ill girl (delusion) who is painting a painting of a man staring with a knife and a fork in his hands and an empty plate in front of him (it symbolizing that the girl is 'hungry' for something to happen) but towards the end it's a plot twist that she actually never painted anything it was just a White Painting (title of story) and that the white paint symbolises emptiness

main question:
anyways i have a reflection as a presentation to do and i want to do the first slide to be just white (obviously with title and name) and then add images throughout and then at the end just a white slide again

im scared that the teachers (they do collective marking) won't understand this concept and mark me down for 'not aesthetically pleasing' or sum
is there a way i can make this concept obvious? (im not allowed to ask for reflection + slide feedback AT ALL i get a 0: we only get feedback for story - headteacher rules idk)

 

[Ilikedrivingbymycarandthe]

bg info:

im scared that the teachers (they do collective marking) won't understand this concept and mark me down for 'not aesthetically pleasing' or sum
is there a way i can make this concept obvious? (im not allowed to ask for reflection + slide feedback AT ALL i get a 0: we only get feedback for story - headteacher rules idk)

You can try to make the concept obvious by making the other slides with pictures highly colourful/ themed if that makes sense? To emphasise that you are capable of making an aesthetic presentation and the blank beginning was merely a stylistic choice. The slides with pictures should be really well executed tho, + go along with a very explicit explanation of ur story bc some teachers r

 

[alphxreturns]

also, blank white can be used well aesthetically, for example with typewriter fonts, a minimalistic style can both look nice (if the text is small and simple) as well as convey your symbolic ideas.

plus: if you end up going for this style for the first page use punctuation like "."

actually idk but it may look cool