I honestly don't know where to put this so I hope it's okay if I post a thread here. Essays are very much my weak point, and I had sent it to both my teacher and a friend to see if they could provide some feedback but neither have responded so could someone possibly look over it for me? Thanks 
Core text is The Tempest, and I just used last year's HSC question.
I've put a link to the google doc instead (hope that's okay):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cumD1SjIIoC-A-_w7yVPkGNolw7RyZV9IeGNsLcs15Y/edit?usp=sharing
I've looked over it a few times but without any proper feedback I don't even know if this is an alright essay. (forgot to include conclusion, sorry)
Core text is The Tempest, and I just used last year's HSC question.
I've put a link to the google doc instead (hope that's okay):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cumD1SjIIoC-A-_w7yVPkGNolw7RyZV9IeGNsLcs15Y/edit?usp=sharing
I've looked over it a few times but without any proper feedback I don't even know if this is an alright essay. (forgot to include conclusion, sorry)
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