Just want to start by saying Im not implying anything, just trying to help (ppl tend to fly off the deep end without reading........ myself included
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Is your response above the marking criteria or is it *your opinion* that its above the criteria?
Just asking this (in my experience-10 years of senior teaching) as many students feel this after spending so much time on something but if you actually go through the criteria with someone who is objective (like the marker), it may actually be the right mark eg its too descriptive but you dont realise/cant see the difference between description and analysis because youre not being objective about your work- which is hard to do.
My advice: get someone else to look at it (not another student) as it may be right or the criteria may be bad enough to warrant a remark at the department head's level.
The BOS wouldnt do a thing....... its a school issue
Hope this heaps