Care to read my creative writing piece? (Year 11) (1 Viewer)

[MATHmaster]

I finished my first creative writing and I'm trying to write different ones in preparation for my Yr 11 Exam next term (1st week) so I could work with several different ideas.

Could anyone please read it and give feedback? Preferably a mark out of 15?

I will PM you if you want to read it...

Thank you very much!

 

[slyhunter]

More than happy to look over it, any specific criteria to a question or just a generic story?

 

[MATHmaster]

More than happy to look over it, any specific criteria to a question or just a generic story?

It has to relate to something philosophical; I decided to write it based on a philosophical journey...

 

[Amaranth_]

ill be happy to read it and give you some feedback, PM