H HQ_BUDDY Member Joined Oct 13, 2004 Messages 43 Feb 12, 2005 #1 can some on plz edit my short story for my first assesment or even just give me an idea on the mark of wat it may get, also on tips to do it better and things that are wrong to fix
can some on plz edit my short story for my first assesment or even just give me an idea on the mark of wat it may get, also on tips to do it better and things that are wrong to fix
