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[gossipgirll]

can someone be kind enough to give me feedback for an english essay i have written on the common mod.
pls if yes share ur email n ill send it to you

 

[Hehehe22]

I'm in your year but if it's The Crucible I could probably give you some feedback if you'd like

 

[gossipgirll]

I'm in your year but if it's The Crucible I could probably give you some feedback if you'd like

omg ur so kind tysm for the offer but im doing 1984

 

[Hehehe22]

omg ur so kind tysm for the offer but im doing 1984

Ahh that's ok then, hope you find someone else to help

 

[rh_06]

can someone be kind enough to give me feedback for an english essay i have written on the common mod.
pls if yes share ur email n ill send it to you

Sorry but I'm quite busy around now, but if you can post one of your paragraphs, I can give some quick feedback when I get the chance and you can probably replicate/use that feedback for your other paragraphs. I also did 1984 (2024 HSC and got a B6) so ig one could say I'm qualified- But make sure you consistently check with your teacher for feedback.