Essay on "Belonging Brings Acceptance" (2 Viewers)

[1ltx]

Hey guyz, can anyone help me with the "Belonging Brings Acceptance" topic.


Can give me some ideas or/and ways of writing it.


my tearcher said i have to write about ways of disagree and agree with the topic and whether i agree it or not.


Thanks alot!!!

 

[1ltx]

Anyone could help???

 

[brendroid]

Here's a tip.

Go through the text. Find what points you can. My argument is different from your argument. Heck, we may be doing different texts. So my ideas on belonging, shaped by my text, may not be applicable to your text.

 

[1ltx]

eh..well...i m in Yr 11, and i actually dont have a text....

 

[brendroid]

Then why are you trying to do the topic without the text?

 

[1ltx]

Its a sort of like a discussion.............................><

 

[brendroid]

How do you think belonging brings acceptance then?

 

[1ltx]

Well, thats exactly what i dont understand......

 

[brendroid]

Let's think then shall we?

What does it mean to belong?

And what does it mean to be accepted?

 

[1ltx]

sense of belonging can have lots of meaning. i think, belonging is my unique status of identity and what i am. eg. my homeland, my family, my interests. with people who has those things in common with me, i will feel i belongs to them, and accepted

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[brendroid]

So you're accepted in a group or a country or something like that? Why would you, though?

 

[1ltx]

coz we have something that is in common - -/..

can you tell me, or give an example of your definition of belonging and acceptance pls..?

 

[brendroid]

What I'm doing is much better, I think. It's helping you to think of your own understanding. You're not going to have someone over your shoulder telling you what your understanding of the text is supposed to be - you have to think of it almost on the spot.

 

[1ltx]

ok...

so do u think am right?...

or what should i think of now....

 

[brendroid]

As long as you can find examples in the text that support your understanding, there is no right or wrong. It's all in how you back up your claims.

 

[1ltx]

ok./// so can you lead me to the next step - -?

 

[brendroid]

First step is getting your opinion on the 'question'. Second step might be creating an introduction, but you're not writing an essay or are you?

 

[1ltx]

i am writing a discussion..... like you have to write a introduction and then write about whether you disagree or agree with the topic.. and extent your understanding...

 

[brendroid]

So in the introduction you literally introduce your case. You're going to be talking about how beloning brings acceptance, and maybe offer two conflicting views on this.

 

[1ltx]

yeah, but my problem is - - how belonging brings acceptance - - ?