MarccAnthony
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I have half yearlies tomorrow and having practiced my short story for the past week i thought to turn to just practicing a full essay question the night before :3 - I am quite strong at the body of essays. However i lack strength in the intros usually though i am in the band 5's for essays. - would anyone be able to help me just reenforce the intro to help me get higher band 5's and maybe 6's 
? So this is it using a HSC Question from past papers;
"Acceptance can lead to a sense of fulfillment, at a cost"
Considered a fundamental part of being human, belonging is a perception held by one. This enables them to be inherently connected and develop a strong affinity with those around them. However, in trying to belong and be accepted one can become distinguished with their old self. Through Peter Skrzyneckis' anthology the 'Immigrant Chronicles' and Anni Khaans' historic biography 'Mandela', the cost of being accepted and its notions are explored.
Constructive criticism please, once again intro's are not my strong point...
Thanks
? So this is it using a HSC Question from past papers;"Acceptance can lead to a sense of fulfillment, at a cost"
Considered a fundamental part of being human, belonging is a perception held by one. This enables them to be inherently connected and develop a strong affinity with those around them. However, in trying to belong and be accepted one can become distinguished with their old self. Through Peter Skrzyneckis' anthology the 'Immigrant Chronicles' and Anni Khaans' historic biography 'Mandela', the cost of being accepted and its notions are explored.
Constructive criticism please, once again intro's are not my strong point...
Thanks