is anyone free to look at my belonging essay.? (1 Viewer)

[Mdzabakly]

hey there just woundering if anyone was free to look at my belonging essay.
i had another one but my teacher kept sending it back and saying there are problems so instead of using that i used the good paragraphs from it and added another related text ( from my assignment which i got full marks for), i sent it to my teacheer but so far she has been unresponsive. i have my exam on tuesday so i really wanna start remembering one of the essays but need help chooosing which one!! plz someone msg me and read my essay to see if its sufficient! thanks.

 

[Michelle Lin]

I'm not a tutor and I'm doing my HSC this year too but I could look over it and point out anything I've been taught that you need to fix, etc?

 

[Mdzabakly]

umm ok sure , msg me your email x.x

 

[Michelle Lin]

hey, sent you an email but idk if you got it