Wurger
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Hey,
Since I started in high school, the idea of having a topic sentence at the start and link at the end of a paragraph (for essays) has been drained into me for all subjects so I can respond to the question . However as time has gone on the paragraphs have gotten larger, and now in year 12 it has gotten to the point where teachers say my paragraphs are too big and confusing. Teachers say to break it up, but the thing is is that my paragraphs are discussing a single idea, and if I split them up, I won't be able to do links and topic sentences for all the paragraphs since that would be too many, but I still need to be referencing back to the question I am being asked so I show I am answering it. So what the heck do I do?
Thanks
Since I started in high school, the idea of having a topic sentence at the start and link at the end of a paragraph (for essays) has been drained into me for all subjects so I can respond to the question . However as time has gone on the paragraphs have gotten larger, and now in year 12 it has gotten to the point where teachers say my paragraphs are too big and confusing. Teachers say to break it up, but the thing is is that my paragraphs are discussing a single idea, and if I split them up, I won't be able to do links and topic sentences for all the paragraphs since that would be too many, but I still need to be referencing back to the question I am being asked so I show I am answering it. So what the heck do I do?
Thanks