Looking for feedback on essay. (1 Viewer)

[thetoygang]

I'm looking for some constructive criticism and areas for improvement on an essay mainly on structure and wording. The essay is on the option - Indigenous People.
Please PM me or post in the thread if you're willing to help me and i'll PM you a copy of the essay.

 

[Spiritual Being]

Finished.

I didn't know much about the topic (I mean, I haven't done it before LOL), so I was just expanding on your information and including extra's.

Hope I helped.

 

[captainpigs]

I'll be happy to help.
Send through the essay