my section 3 doesn't make sense (1 Viewer)

[iptteacherssuck]

when i finished the section3 in panic... and read it. .I could not uderstand one word i was saying..serisouly..i screwed it up

my title was - How change perspective is conveyed - some weird crap then the conclusion was

as you can see changing perspective is easy..some totally different crap..

my quality of writing just degraded exponentially as i wrote..

from..

reasonable writing with the feature of a feature article, rhetorical Q, Quotes from teh article between the apragraphs, well phrased sentences

to

change good so alibrandi easy change perspective . Me don't know what talk about. As result me good english hsc. me 100%

NOT GOOD!!!

 

[McLake]

I think I used the name John smith, but said I had a husband ...

Oh Dear ...

 

[smalec]

lol, what a classic...
in the creative writing section i said that i lived in a caravan, but then at the top of my letter i wrote an address something along the lines of: 72 Palmville Rd, North Sydney....
hmmmm...but what can you do?