objective thing?? (1 Viewer)

[Schniz]

is this an ok objective thing for the requirement report?

Objectives

To enable relatively computer illiterate users to keep their computers running to their full potential by creating a set of easy to follow tutorials and making them easily accessible by publishing them in a director movie format. The programs covered in the tutorials will include: “AdAware” (for spyware and adware removal), “AVG Antivirus” (for virus protection and removal), “System Restore” (for the protection data loss and/or evading problems which occur), “Disk Cleanup” (for the removal of unneeded files) and “Disk Defragmenter” (for the organizing of files on the hard drive).

 

[seremify007]

That sounds pretty good in my opinion but I think your objectives sound too much like the solution rather than an objective- try to keep it simple.

Eg. "Enable relatively computer illiterate users to keep their computers running to their full potential" is an Objective

Eg. "by publishing them in a director movie format" is not an Objective

Eg. "The programs covered in the tutorials will include: “AdAware” (for spyware and adware removal), “AVG Antivirus” (for virus protection and removal), “System Restore” (for the protection data loss and/or evading problems which occur), “Disk Cleanup” (for the removal of unneeded files) and “Disk Defragmenter” (for the organizing of files on the hard drive)." is too specific- no need to mention individual program names yet; but you can list the tasks which you want the tutorials to cover and then put "Eg." (and the program name).

As a tip, if you want it to look longer (and also more organised), use dot points when listing objectives or examples.