thunda
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- 2006
my module A essay uses David Malouf's "An imaginary life" and Wordsworths poems. I structure my essay by writing bout an imaginary life then bout wordsworths poems.
In my trial 1 essay they didnt say anything was rong with my structure however in my trial 2 essay (it was a different teacher marking than trial 1) and she wrote "Begin with Wordsworth rather than An Imaginary Life because it is the older text!"
Now i wanna know if this is true .. shuld i change my essay for tomorw to be ritten like that... cos i remember my essay the original way i did it but i dont wanna do sumthing if its gona make me lose marks ..
please i need advice
In my trial 1 essay they didnt say anything was rong with my structure however in my trial 2 essay (it was a different teacher marking than trial 1) and she wrote "Begin with Wordsworth rather than An Imaginary Life because it is the older text!"
Now i wanna know if this is true .. shuld i change my essay for tomorw to be ritten like that... cos i remember my essay the original way i did it but i dont wanna do sumthing if its gona make me lose marks ..
please i need advice