thank you to all your help
this is what i got
"I believe that spending a semester on exchange would not only allow me the opportunity to travel overseas (something I have yet to do), but would also allow me to diversify and experience a different culture. It is gaining this cultural awareness that will allow me to expand and open my mind to new and exciting experiences.
I also believe that during my time on exchange I will mature as an individual, as living so far from home for the first time will make me become more independent. This will provide me with skills I will need in later life when I finish my degree and enter the workforce. Further, I believe by spending a semester overseas it will help increase my chances of employment after completing my degree, as it shows I can work independently.
After doing some research I have decided that Canada is where I want to spend my time on exchange. This is after speaking to people who have gone and hearing about how beautiful the country is (even if it gets a little chilly) and how warm and friendly the people are. Also it will be a fantastic opportunity to meet new people who are from all different countries, who all have their own experiences to share.
More specifically I would like to attend Carleton University, as again after doing some research I have found it to offer units that will add value to my Human Resource Management degree. Human Resource Management it involves interacting with others, and not only will going on exchange help increase my ability in this, Carleton University will provide me with a greater understanding on how another country thinks and feels towards human resource management.
Finally, I believe that going on exchange is a once in a lifetime opportunity, something which I believe to be very rewarding to me not only for when I’m overseas, but also for the rest of my life. It will be an experience I will never forget."
yay or nay???