First Three Words of your MW (Just 'Cause) (1 Viewer)

['mogen]

I'm just a bit behind...
I like this thread- very interesting. =]

My first three words are a sentence.
"His eyes burn."

 

[cole-]

either

'There is a ...' [dead spot in the night]

or

'She watched me' [With yellow eyes, she watched me.]


without the rest of it, it seems really lame!!

 

[Schoey93]

either

'There is a ...' [dead spot in the night]

or

'She watched me' [With yellow eyes, she watched me.]


without the rest of it, it seems really lame!!

I'm in year 10, but I have started a short story which may very well end up as a major work.

The first three words are, "Mamma strode gallantly" (across the room, staring at me, her angry eyes a sign of the imminent eruption). After that - "Federico, get over here!" she snapped at me.
I like it, myself, arrogance yes.

 

[agua.fuego]

Quote starting: "Why is it"
And my start which will probably get changed before long: "The light was"

I've written three parts of mine and now it's like... hmm. Where to now?

 

[cole-]

Yeah I know what you mean...
It's hard to really get stuck in there and start knuckling out the details.
I like looking at it from here...
I don't want this year to progress! =[ I wish time would stop. STOPSTOP!

 

[agua.fuego]

Yeah, just make the Extension 2 year stop so we can have more time! I just sat blankly today doing NOTHING. Grr.

 

[ixswans]

I carry my journal with me to school every day, its easy because its so light anyway. Just jotting down things as they come to me so I can go back over ideas which I thought of but never really gave much credit to.

Also, wide reading of both fiction and non fiction and previous MW's.

 

[Schoey93]

I carry my journal with me to school every day, its easy because its so light anyway. Just jotting down things as they come to me so I can go back over ideas which I thought of but never really gave much credit to.

Also, wide reading of both fiction and non fiction and previous MW's.

Fair enough. If I was you though, I would make sure I still got time to rest, eat and drink of course.

 

[ixswans]

Fair enough. If I was you though, I would make sure I still got time to rest, eat and drink of course.

I rest, eat and drink for >99% of my non-school day

14 free periods a week ensures I have enough time to get homework and study done for the moment

 

[cole-]

14 FREE???
Holy moly
how long are your lessons?

i have 8.
and ours are 50 minutes.
although thats over 7 days not 5.
but still
14!!

 

[ixswans]

~40 minutes, mine is over 5 days only. Shiteload of extensions (well, only 3, but still) which means I get to school at 8 every morning without fail.

Meh, doesn't matter. I'm having fun at school for the first time in ages.

 

[harryc]

"The Sun Beat..." Of course, it'll probably change. It already has about 12 times...

 

[diametric]

"Ma'am? Hello? Excuse me? --

Three would of looked odd.

 

[bubblybrooke3]

"jane hearts nick’s". Literally without any capitals. Ha.

 

[extrabigthings]

have 143 words.

' Renee shoots her'

gotta get cracking on the major.

 

[y.moon]

Clasping desperately; his hands began to slip as did his lifeforce

yeeh it's random...and its more then 3 words...
but you get the picture

 

[six demon bag]

"I don't remember..."

 

[tku336]

"'Dont't you see we're being fucked over?" said the balding man in the too shiny suit.

yeah, i cant end halfway inside direct speech.

 

[hereyes]

"In the time"

wow. brilliant start isn't it? :mad1:
eh. at least the markers are reading through our whole major work.
never thought i'd say that.

 

[chingyloke]

"Dr. Foster, this..."

woo. 83 words in.