Belonging (AOS) (1 Viewer)

[Satty08]

Help, Please?


My CSSA trials are on Monday for English (std) AOS. This being belonging as most of you all know.. i was wondering with my related text, i have been studying in depth the movie 'Freedom writers' my last assignment i had received on belonging i had received a 16/20.. i was not impressed.. my teacher told me that my related text was not as good as it could be.. i was wondering if the song by immortal technique 'Dancing with the devil' is appropriate for catholic school trial, the reason i am posing this question is because the text itself i VERY graphic but has a good theme of belonging.

The text

YouTube - Immortal Technique Dancing with the devil

Lyrics
http://www.lyrics007.com/Immortal Technique Lyrics/Dance With the Devil Lyrics.html
Thanks alot!

Regards,

 

[Aerath]

16/20 is nothing to be sniffed at. At my school, if you got 16/20 for all your exams, you'd be sitting nicely upon Top 20....[out of 200].

 

[Satty08]

16/20 is nothing to be sniffed at. At my school, if you got 16/20 for all your exams, you'd be sitting nicely upon Top 20....[out of 200].

Yeah, i understand that. but seeing how the CSSA trials are externally marked and my teacher was not exactly what you would call a un-bias marker I'm not sure what i would have got?

Regards,