English trials? (2 Viewers)

[TorMental]

Belonging - 12 pages band 5/6

Lol shit, 12 pages? You must have really big handwriting. I wrote 1.2k words(6pages) in barely 45mins and my handwriting is medium -small.

 

[Beachtraveller]

i thought it was fairly easy and straight forward. Mind you my creative writing and related text fit perfectly into their respective questions. However, the comprehension questions didn't seem to be asking for much.

 

[Skriker]

What did you guys right for the poem question the one about one image which describes his sense of belonging?

 

[umz93]

I said (may be wrong) nature imagery first stanza=persona belonging to nature. Also gave various techniques

 

[Skriker]

I said (may be wrong) nature imagery first stanza=persona belonging to nature. Also gave various techniques

Oh right, because I just said something about him singing with the bees showing he belongs or something like that can't remember what I wrote haha.

 

[umz93]

As long as you give correct quotes + techniques to back up your answer, any answer can be correct

 

[krnofdrg]

I wrote about 1300-1400ish words for the Skrzynecki , yeah my writing is medium-large. not too big though.

The mushroom poem was hard? I just said imagery lol for the sun bit ??

The comparison text was wtf... so bs

 

[Riproot]

Section 1 was easy as fuck. I think I might lose a mark for the facebooky thingy, but every other text had sooo many techniques.
Section 2 was shit... Had 40 minutes left when I started so I made up a bullshit story... :/
Section 3 was meh. I don't know much about Crucible so I didn't expect much... Wrote like 5.5 pages... maybe 10/15... :/

 

[mangoz]

I found everything to be pretty simplistic tbh. Although i nearly stuffed up my creative because i DIDNT READ THE QUESTION LOL. Since i'm pretty sure you had to relate it to "place" with your creative in which my integrated one did but if it didn't...uh oh.

 

[Riproot]

The mushroom poem was hard? I just said imagery lol for the sun bit ??
The comparison text was wtf... so bs

The personification of the tree and metaphor of the sun or some shit.
Used article and autobiography for comparison and I used hyperbole and personification in auto and symbolism and metaphor or some shit in article.

 

[Riproot]

I found everything to be pretty simplistic tbh. Although i nearly stuffed up my creative because i DIDNT READ THE QUESTION LOL. Since i'm pretty sure you had to relate it to "place" with your creative in which my integrated one did but if it didn't...uh oh.

PLACE?!
Lol... I didn't read that.

 

[Riproot]

What did you guys right for the poem question the one about one image which describes his sense of belonging?

Image of tree belonging to place in the hollow.
Warmth of sun = metaphor
Tree = personification and symbolism for a person
Some shit like that.

 

[krnofdrg]

The belonging question? the challenge to belong may be resisted or embraced
I said e.g -embraced through relationships and etc

-Resisted (Cultural/Social Barriers and lack of acceptance)

Can anyone translate this in simplistic terms tome? I may have misinterpreted the question.


The mushroom question the fuk?? =.=.... i use the sun as an exemplar of imagery or something ??

 

[Skriker]

The belonging question? the challenge to belong may be resisted or embraced
I said e.g -embraced through relationships and etc

-Resisted (Cultural/Social Barriers and lack of acceptance)

Can anyone translate this in simplistic terms tome? I may have misinterpreted the question.


The mushroom question the fuk?? =.=.... i use the sun as an exemplar of imagery or something ??

OOO I said when one experiences differences they can experience alienation and can be resisted to belong however when they find common values they will feel accepted and have a sense of self worth embracing there sense of belong, would i get marked down for answering both of the questions? :O

 

[Riproot]

The belonging question? the challenge to belong may be resisted or embraced
I said e.g -embraced through relationships and etc
-Resisted (Cultural/Social Barriers and lack of acceptance)

I said some BS about how people strive for Belonging or reject it for their own personal gain. I.e. Proctor in the crucible tries to belong with Elizabeth to gain a sense of home and comfort with her and rejects the theocratic society and its hysteria to gain individuality and shit like that.

 

[Riproot]

OOO I said when one experiences differences they can experience alienation and can be resisted to belong however when they find common values they will feel accepted and have a sense of self worth embracing there sense of belong, would i get marked down for answering both of the questions? :O

You may get marked down for misspelling their.

 

[Skriker]

You may get marked down for misspelling their.

..........I ofcourse I didn't rigt there was just in a rush typing and wasn't thinking. But could I get marked down for saying that? :O

 

[krnofdrg]

Oh well the essay was not bad .

Im just scared short answers =.=...

probs got 10/15 or even less...

 

[lukejm]

You all wrote so much.
I wrote 3 pages for section 2
and 4 pages for section 3

 

[Riproot]

..........I ofcourse I didn't rigt there was just in a rush typing and wasn't thinking. But could I get marked down for saying that? :O

Write? lol
But seriously, I don't think they mark down for spelling and shit unless they can't understand what you've written due to your spelling.