Section 3 - Extended Response (1 Viewer)

[rockadeli]

Agreed, AYLI fitted excellently.

I second that!

 

[bobthebuilder94]

the question itself was hard....like because this is what i thought it said to explore:

connections to place influence perceptions of belonging belonging

I logic'd it to be a one way relationship, and you couldn't explore backwards, and because it said place...i didn't include society, because place=nature and stuff like that....so idk,, if you could include society, i wish i could redo this essay haha

I'D LIKE TO PUT A DICK-IN-bos, srsly soo hard to mould it around dickison, IS IT BAD I ONLY DID 2 POEMS AND A RELATED??? but managed 5 pages? i did This is my letter to the world, and I was hungry all the years................FORGOT TO PUT THAT STUPID AS BERRY OF A MOUNTAIN BUSH QUOTE, SO PISSED AFTER THAT EXAM

 

[_deloso]

heey my related was on the same idea! lol, you didn't happen to do kath walker/oodgeroo did you?

altho i suppose most aboriginal poems are based on the land

lol yeah it is oodgeroo. "We are going" lol is that yours as well? It fitted in quite perfectly!

 

[jamesfirst]

my prepared essay was all about place


gg people who told me that I'll do shit with a prepared essay

 

[_deloso]

how did you work perception into it though??

connection with a place allows one to perceive or experience a sense of belonging. Lack of connection negates it.

 

[aphorae]

lol yeah it is oodgeroo. "We are going" lol is that yours as well? It fitted in quite perfectly!

Omg yeeeeeeees!!! It was amazing

 

[isenseven]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

 

[RookieLaw]

Can't believe it was one related, fml.

 

[herbs1]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

Yes. You'd lose 2/5 or so marks, because you didn't conclude, and didn't stay in the essay text type (no conclusion). You don't have a shot at a b6 for that response. Should have stopped writing and finished it.

 

[Hayzazz]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

You would, because you argument is not finished... Bad luck :\

 

[herbs1]

Can't believe it was one related, fml.

Why not just use two?

 

[D94]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

Logically yes, but the marker 'could' see merit in your essay and not mark you down as harshly.

 

[mitchh81]

i did migrant hostel, 10 mary street and st patricks college and it worked like a charm !

 

[aphorae]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

ye should've written a conclusion

it's okay though, it kind of depends. how many related texts did you write on? if only one and it's not substantial enough, you'd lose even more marks.

also depends on initial sophistication of course

 

[Hayzazz]

Can't believe it was one related, fml.

lol... it said you had to use "at least ONE related". You could have used 2

 

[zxreth]

Would i lose a few marks if i didn't finish? I got half way through my last paragraph on RT and didn't write a conclusion

sorry to sound harsh, but yes you would.

 

[D94]

Can't believe it was one related, fml.

It said "at least ONE other related text of your own choosing", so you could of used two or three etc.

 

[RookieLaw]

Lol, yes i used 2.

 

[isenseven]

ye should've written a conclusion

it's okay though, it kind of depends. how many related texts did you write on? if only one and it's not substantial enough, you'd lose even more marks.

also depends on initial sophistication of course

Ah shit, i only did one but it did fit quite well with place as my 2nd had nothing to do with place.

How many marks are we talking here 2 - 3 maybe?

 

[dannnys]

used Postcard and Folk Museum..essay q. defiently suited Skrzynecki...lol who guessed that it would be place? spot on haha