Crime Creative Piece (1 Viewer)

[jamie_95]

Hey guys!

I am really struggling with a crime creative story? Any ideas, suggestions or help?

Greatly appreciated!

 

[eshay lad 69]

when i almost got caught by the ticket police for not payin on the train into central

pm me if you want more info about the story or want to interview me irl

 

[teganjoyy]

Hey love, I was struggling for a while also, until I started playing with different voices - so changing the perspective of who I was writing from, and swapping, if need be, between first, third, and even second person. You still need to have a basic storyline of course, but it can make an average idea much better from the markers perspective! x

 

[medicore]

when i almost got caught by the ticket police for not payin on the train into central

pm me if you want more info about the story or want to interview me irl

This story..
If you continue on with you.
I guarantee you'll get 49 or 50 / 50.
The plot is interesting & there are I guess many underlying issues which you can relate to for 'crime'