hayabusaboston
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First of all, BOOYAH on a rounded off 99 percent in the yearly chem exam! YAAA! plus (I believe) 100 percent for 2u, and have yet to get results for 3u, physics, english and english extension.
BUT it seems my teacher has been browsing BoS and in fact had FOUND Realise's 3u yearly paper, and FRIGGIN SET IT FOR US AS OUR YEARLY! LOOL! So yea am not looking at 100 I dont think, maybe 80's.
Look realise what uve done, uve made such a lovely paper my teacher even used it! haha.
ANYWAY HERE'S MY SHORT STORY, tell me what you think of it plz.
BUT it seems my teacher has been browsing BoS and in fact had FOUND Realise's 3u yearly paper, and FRIGGIN SET IT FOR US AS OUR YEARLY! LOOL! So yea am not looking at 100 I dont think, maybe 80's.
Look realise what uve done, uve made such a lovely paper my teacher even used it! haha.
ANYWAY HERE'S MY SHORT STORY, tell me what you think of it plz.
They were under the largest tree of their local park, overlooking the city lights, lying on a chilly bed of grass that tickled their backs. Li and Cai gazed up at the glorious night sky, flaring white stars sparkling like little orbs, strewn wildly across the universe in a mixture of swirling patterns and erratic rings.
Cai lay in Li’s arms, tucked into his chest like a sweet, beautiful little princess. He gently caressed her smooth hair, its silky feel so marvelously sensual he tingled at the touch.
“Cai, you’ve made my life just perfect you know? I’ve never known such an amazing girl as you. I love you more than any words can ever express.” He whispered softly into her ear. She smiled brightly at him, and pulled herself closer to his warm body. She looked up and stared deep into his eyes, before leaning in, lips parted sensually. They kissed passionately, suddenly fuelled by torrents of wild desire. Li fervently tore off his own shirt and scrambled to take off Cai's vest, before quickly unhooking her bra with one hand. Her voluptuous breasts glistened in the moonlight with the sweat of anticipation, the powerful drive of sexual intensity.Together they fell back onto the grass, bare backed, the crisp chill of the grass adding an electric fervour to the experience.
Cai lovingly massaged his chest and muscles, moving around and onto his back, pulling him in eagerly. She kissed him in places he’d never been kissed before, and it drove his excitement to incredible levels. His erection was rock hard, rigid beyond control.Li likewise explored Cai, kissing her gently all over and feeling the beautiful tone and lean musculature of her perfect body. Her honey soft breasts pressed hard against his skin, and the feeling was so heavenly he felt almost explosive with sexual hunger
Li didn’t want this beautiful evening to end. It was the most amazing thing he’d ever experienced in his entire life. He gradually brought his attention back to Cai's luscious lips and they continued to kiss each other vigorously, grasping to experience as much of each others bodies as possible.
They stripped down till they were completely naked now . Li rolled onto his back, while Cai lay on top of him, legs wrapped around his. He slowly guided himself inside her, letting the rippling sensation course through him and ignite his nerves spectacularly. They rocked back and forth in unison, Li grasping Cai’s buttocks and moaning with pleasure. The waves of sensation swept through them both with an incredible intensity. The rocking got faster, and faster, the rushes of intensity harder and harder. Eventually they couldn’t continue any longer and the energy suddenly surged out of them rapidly, in an explosion of ecstasy. Cai softly fell onto his chest, exhausted, but happy.
"Li, that was, just incredible. Thank you so much” she whispered, snuggling into his chest again. Li felt like the happiest man in the world.
“I don't think I'll ever forget this night, I’m glad I could share it with you, and no one else.” Li replied soothingly. Cai closed her eyes, her long eyelashes fluttering in majestic brilliance. She slowly dozed off in his arms. He gave her a kiss on the forehead before resting his head back on the grass and lulling himself to sleep. The two simply lay there, naked, pure, two lovers in a passionate embrace with a raw and uninhibited love for each other. They slept deep into the night, blissfully in a world of their own..
Cai lay in Li’s arms, tucked into his chest like a sweet, beautiful little princess. He gently caressed her smooth hair, its silky feel so marvelously sensual he tingled at the touch.
“Cai, you’ve made my life just perfect you know? I’ve never known such an amazing girl as you. I love you more than any words can ever express.” He whispered softly into her ear. She smiled brightly at him, and pulled herself closer to his warm body. She looked up and stared deep into his eyes, before leaning in, lips parted sensually. They kissed passionately, suddenly fuelled by torrents of wild desire. Li fervently tore off his own shirt and scrambled to take off Cai's vest, before quickly unhooking her bra with one hand. Her voluptuous breasts glistened in the moonlight with the sweat of anticipation, the powerful drive of sexual intensity.Together they fell back onto the grass, bare backed, the crisp chill of the grass adding an electric fervour to the experience.
Cai lovingly massaged his chest and muscles, moving around and onto his back, pulling him in eagerly. She kissed him in places he’d never been kissed before, and it drove his excitement to incredible levels. His erection was rock hard, rigid beyond control.Li likewise explored Cai, kissing her gently all over and feeling the beautiful tone and lean musculature of her perfect body. Her honey soft breasts pressed hard against his skin, and the feeling was so heavenly he felt almost explosive with sexual hunger
Li didn’t want this beautiful evening to end. It was the most amazing thing he’d ever experienced in his entire life. He gradually brought his attention back to Cai's luscious lips and they continued to kiss each other vigorously, grasping to experience as much of each others bodies as possible.
They stripped down till they were completely naked now . Li rolled onto his back, while Cai lay on top of him, legs wrapped around his. He slowly guided himself inside her, letting the rippling sensation course through him and ignite his nerves spectacularly. They rocked back and forth in unison, Li grasping Cai’s buttocks and moaning with pleasure. The waves of sensation swept through them both with an incredible intensity. The rocking got faster, and faster, the rushes of intensity harder and harder. Eventually they couldn’t continue any longer and the energy suddenly surged out of them rapidly, in an explosion of ecstasy. Cai softly fell onto his chest, exhausted, but happy.
"Li, that was, just incredible. Thank you so much” she whispered, snuggling into his chest again. Li felt like the happiest man in the world.
“I don't think I'll ever forget this night, I’m glad I could share it with you, and no one else.” Li replied soothingly. Cai closed her eyes, her long eyelashes fluttering in majestic brilliance. She slowly dozed off in his arms. He gave her a kiss on the forehead before resting his head back on the grass and lulling himself to sleep. The two simply lay there, naked, pure, two lovers in a passionate embrace with a raw and uninhibited love for each other. They slept deep into the night, blissfully in a world of their own..
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