Comment on a draft narrative... :) (1 Viewer)

[Smile12345]

Hello All...

Is anyone willing to have a look at a segment/paragraph of my draft narrative and make some comments.???

Please PM me or reply in this thread

Thanks in advance.

 

[Smile12345]

Anyone???

 

[obliviousninja]

Anyone???

will do

 

[Smile12345]

will do

Thanks.

 

[NWO]

I can read it as well if u want