justem
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Thanks CRISSYWow that's heaps good congratulations with your mark
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Year 11 2014 Chat :) (12 Viewers)
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Futuremedstudent
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Hey guys, anyone going to the engineering challenge tomorrow at macquarie uni?
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Only you because you're the smartest one here and we don't want to bother your presence.
Futuremedstudent
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seriously, anyone can go...Just literally pay like $20. there are kids from ruse who are going too and they are smarter than me.
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Hahahahahaha, I was only kidding!!
I'm sure they will be peeps from BoS coming tomorrow.
It's better you ask herThanks CRISSY
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Not sure what this is but all the best
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that moment when you spend 30 minutes figuring out your mistake in a maths question >< i'm so stubborn and retarded sometimes (actually, all the time)
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nah I'm not going. but how are you?
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i dont know what i want anymore. i dont know what i need anymore. ive expressed my wish to leave school many times but my parents wont let me.
'don't worry about it too much...' HEEHEE IM SOMEONE WHO WORRIES AND STRESSES AND OVERTHINKS ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING IN LIFE NOT JUST SCHOOL AHAHAHAAAAAAA :') a bit hard for me not to worry :') :')
i've tried to move on and stay positive for the past 2-3 years. never works. im literally so over it, it is driving me insane and i dont know how much more i can take...but i really wish that i could get away from everything...forever... to sleep forever would be lovely actually..
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Why do i have to be a human? why can't i be an animal? a pet.. that way i dont ever have to worry about anything in life. i see my rabbit and im like, gee her life is wonderful. she does nothing all day and gets so much love and affection from my family and me, we give her food, shelter, freedom...
lavender1001
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Wow girl, u gotta lot of problems. Dont worry...I share those f33ls. (T_T)
turnerloos
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Nah bae. turnerloos is non other than, turnerloos
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I sometimes feel like wanting to become a carrot. Although carrots dont move, I will still be happier
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The one and onlyNah bae. turnerloos is non other than, turnerloos
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Think about it this way
If you can endure this time next year (and a few months or so) you get that godly quarter year break and if you don't want to hit Uni straight away you could always do a gap year as your escape or to think your options through
So soldier on we're so close to the end, you don't want to go through all that pain and suffering for nothing
dangerouss
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I very much agree.Think about it this way
If you can endure this time next year (and a few months or so) you get that godly quarter year break and if you don't want to hit Uni straight away you could always do a gap year as your escape or to think your options through
So soldier on we're so close to the end, you don't want to go through all that pain and suffering for nothing
dangerouss
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How'd you go ? (Did you get tyrannosaurusREKT?)
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This was her critique in at the end:
At the moment this essay would probably receive a mark in the B-range, i.e. 17-20 out of 25. You might have to write more when it comes to examinations in your HSC year since usually essays in Modern History should be somewhere between 1000 and 1200 words. With that said, shorter essays can achieve higher marks, but they need to be really well written and you have some issues with expression here. This is problematic because it hinders your ability to get your point across and arguments, including structure, should be as clear and succinct as possible.
I would make the suggestion that you start off with the argument most significant in answering the question, which seemed to be in fact your last paragraph, being Russia’s involvement in WWII. Lastly, be careful about using long quotes. You should be more selective with them, or in other words ensure they need to emphasise your point rather quickly. Writing long quotes in an examination can take up time and also possibly become dreary for the marker to read. Nonetheless, there is certainly potential here. Good luck, you have a lot of time to improve!
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