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I was wondering if someone would be able to share their AOS discovery essay about 'Away' by Michael Gow, so I could have a look over, I'm at complete brick wall with this subject.
 

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I was wondering if someone would be able to share their AOS discovery essay about 'Away' by Michael Gow, so I could have a look over and rewrite it in the exam coz i'm too lazy to write my own essay and plagiarising is an easy shortcut to success.
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Thanks nancylime, and astroman I'm hardly going to remember my own essay let alone someone else's who's essay would be more up to par than mine, I'm generally asking for help because it isn't my strongest topic.
 

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I don't why I bother asking for help, if all I'm going to get are answer's like this, your answers are the reason I don't ask for help and just do most things on my own!
 

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I don't why I bother asking for help, if all I'm going to get are answer's like this, your answers are the reason I don't ask for help and just do most things on my own!
LOL what a joke. if you did do most things on your own, you wouldn't be asking for people's essays
 

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I don't why I bother asking for help, if all I'm going to get are answer's like this, your answers are the reason I don't ask for help and just do most things on my own!
Nobody asks for help by asking to look at someone else's entire essay
 

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Key word 'most' and the essay was just going to help me get started, I wasn't going to plagiarize, I'm personally not willing to lose what little marks I already get on something as stupid as plagiarism. I was hoping for some more mature answer's and all I got was this, so, I reckon you can all go fuck yourselves!!
 

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Key word 'most' and the essay was just going to help me get started, I wasn't going to plagiarize, I'm personally not willing to lose what little marks I already get on something as stupid as plagiarism. I was hoping for some more mature answer's and all I got was this, so, I reckon you can all go fuck yourselves!!
Well, no one is going to help you any further with that attitude lol.
 

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All of you are so mean, here's an AoS essay for you.

Due to the complex and abstract nature of the concept of belonging, a true sense of belonging can be found in different circumstances for different people. As each individual has their own desires, needs and values, they find their place in the world and a genuine sense of belonging in various avenues. Many individuals find the strongest sense of belonging through relationships, due to the fact that by nature these connections fulfill the human need for social interaction and enrich the lives of the persons involved. Conversely, relationships which do not fit the conventional model of this kind of connection and thus result in negative outcomes for individuals can ultimately lead to a true sense of not belonging and its related notions of isolation and disaffection. Instead, these individuals may attain the same sense that they truly belong outside relationships, though their connections to other ideas such as place and culture, or within themselves. Shakespeare’s As You Like It and Khyenstse Norbu’s Travellers and Magicians are two texts in which an exploration of belonging and its different meanings for individuals ultimately leads to a deeper understanding of the complexity of the concept of belonging and thus that individuals can find a true sense of belonging in a great range of places, not limited to relationships.



Relationships by nature embody ideas of a connection on a psychological level between two people which can fulfill other fundamental human needs such as the need for social interaction, and thus can result in the individuals involved attaining a true sense of belonging. When individuals find meaning and purpose in connections with other people, as they often do in relationships, the need to belong is fulfilled in the greatest sense as the individuals life is enriched by the positive outcomes for their self esteem, security and stability. This idea can be seen in the relationship between Adam and Orlando set up by Shakespeare in As You Like It. Adam promises that he will “follow thee to the last gasp with truth and loyalty” when Orlando decides to go to the forest. By changing the rhyme scheme for Adam’s declaration of commitment to Orlando, Shakespeare effectively emphasizes the lack of superficiality that exists in this relationship as opposed to other relationships he sets up in the play. In their relationship, Orlando finds purpose and stability in his life, knowing he has another person who will always look out for him, just as Adam finds purpose knowing he will always be in the company of Orlando, seen where he states “Fortune cannot recompense me better than to die well and not my master’s debtor.” Through this, Shakespeare communicates that in relationships which are built on trust, loyalty or other solid connections between people, individuals can find meaning, stability, purpose and thus a true sense that they belong. In Travellers and Magicians Norbu inquires into similar ideas which support the value of relationships in the search for a true sense of belonging. In the relationship between Tashi and Deki, Norbu communicates the idea of their deeper connection on all levels through quickly alternating close ups between the expressive eyes of Deki and Tashi, which create the idea that their souls and desires are connecting as their eyes remain fixed on one another. The couple is also often presented on equal terms embracing each other, caring and showing affection through mid shots. Their connection leads Tashi to exclaim “If I never left this place, and died right here with you, I would not die unhappy.” Norbu thus effectively supports the idea that meaning and purpose can be found in real connections with others, and that consequently individuals can find the strongest sense of belonging in relationships such as these. Through this relationship, he also inquires further into the reasons why relationships can lead to a individual feeling that they truly belong. By suggesting that the positive outcomes which the human psyche correlates with attaining a sense of belonging, such as understanding, stability and care manifest themselves in relationships, Norbu advocates and supports the almost inextricable link between belonging and relationships.
 

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Key word 'most' and the essay was just going to help me get started, I wasn't going to plagiarize, I'm personally not willing to lose what little marks I already get on something as stupid as plagiarism. I was hoping for some more mature answer's and all I got was this, so, I reckon you can all go fuck yourselves!!
Yeah no offense but if you're only starting english now you're not going to do that well anyway.
 

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Yeah no offense but if you're only starting english now you're not going to do that well anyway.
Your pretty fucked if you don't have an essay, your still good if your remembering.
 

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Your pretty fucked if you don't have an essay, your still good if your remembering.
Key word 'most' and the essay was just going to help me get started, I wasn't going to plagiarize, I'm personally not willing to lose what little marks I already get on something as stupid as plagiarism. I was hoping for some more mature answer's and all I got was this, so, I reckon you can all go fuck yourselves!!
Sounds like she hasn't started.

OP ask your own class via fb or something.
 

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Key word 'most' and the essay was just going to help me get started, I wasn't going to plagiarize, I'm personally not willing to lose what little marks I already get on something as stupid as plagiarism. I was hoping for some more mature answer's and all I got was this, so, I reckon you can all go fuck yourselves!!
the composer's use of irony elicits the confronting nature of discovering one's autism.
 

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