It's good to have expectations, but please don't do it to the point where you have to be quintessential. Because if you let your own high aims overwhelm you and you crumble under the pressure as a result - then you will have this pessimistic nature embedded inside your consciousness unless you...
haha, thanks
but srsly, there's at least 4 students who are pro at modern. especially my friend who's writing is amazing (holy crap, she's doing year 12 advanced english atm), hence she's boss at humanities
so i have doubts :(
This was her critique in at the end:
At the moment this essay would probably receive a mark in the B-range, i.e. 17-20 out of 25. You might have to write more when it comes to examinations in your HSC year since usually essays in Modern History should be somewhere between 1000 and 1200 words...