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No, i mean if i start with past tense, i want to stick with past tense. I hate shfting back and forth. it's not a memory or anything. Cos if the quote started with " He felt exiled..." i could write something liek.. "Jackey was an uncaring, old man who would bully kids..... etc" But it would...

Yeah, ur right lol. There was a statement in the trails that was like 2 lines long. At first i was gonna actually use it in my story. Worst creative writing disaster ever. :( It only featured places and it was like 2 pages long gg. Now, my creative has a flash back and all aspects of belonging...

Ok. thanks cos it doesnt make sense somehow. For example. "I was an old man with white hair."- it sounds as if it happened in the past. W/E lol its sounds weird. I read too little these days. USed to read like 2 books per week. my creative writing sucks again :(

Crobat, i dont think its a GOOD idea at all at not using the quote lol. It says being ur story with a QUOTE. If you dont, the markers, who hate pre-planned stories, would certainly deduct marks without a second thought. What do you mean by? adding a line at the top of the story?

What do you ppl do in extension 1 and 2? Write stories? Then thats more interesting than standard...

I doubt they gonna specify it lmao. Last year, there were like pictures of children laughing together and one hanging from a tree. So, its pretty easy to bring it in. Oh and if they really specificy the setting: such as the crying girl on the beach, no one owuld do that, and if they did, its...

Your sophiscated language is a strong indication that you had attained band 6 for English.

lol? gg hsc. SHoulndt be a teacher at all , if they students know more than you? People like that need to get fired immediately.

They give u like 4 quotes to choose from. One of them must fit it in lol. If it sets in a differentplace, ill bring it in through a flash back?

... Then wer gonna fail..?

If in he hsc, they make you use first person would htis make sense? "I was an old, lonely, tired man." OR " I'm an old man.." "He was an old, lonely, tired man etc." And if i stay with past tense, should i stay with it throught the essay?

So basically, i am prepared for all eventuallities. leave no stones unturned. Anways, i'm afraid theyll give a quote such as "I am outside the door. OR "I felt expelled and exiled.." Since, my creative has all of this, i believe. It's just that all of this happens 3 paragraphs into my...

Learn as many quotes as you can. Learn quotes from all aspects of belonging. 48 hours and counting.

If they ask for identity, which i think they would, since they havent asked in how many years..? 5? If it asks for identity, you talk about how hes homeless, low self esteem etc If it asks for experiences, even easier lmao, experiences alienation, isolation etc If it asks for connections to...

But, dont make generalised statements that dont answer the question or gg

No lol. HSC is a trick. Ok, man listen lol. It doesnt matter what ever they ask. you still have to mention all the aspects of belonging answer ANSWER the question. For example, if they ask for identity. Sure, Billy's sense of belonging is affected by his identity as well as relationships...

lol, i keep telling u its not part of the syllabus lol. they dont ask for those kind of questions just understanding, identity, accpetance silly apple

I regret being human :(

lol wtf in the trials i mermorised word for word... If i dont study, i tend to do a better job at answering the question

when tyhey say belonging it also means not belonging!! The love to trick lil kids.