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thanks for the comment about my drama my teacher doesn't really like it Diametric where is this cr you speak of i wish to read, but i can't find it in this forum

lols yeah some more variety would be interesting, not that every thing else here has been interesting but really wanna see a film or cr. Come on people don't be afraid its not like we can steal your work now and send it in.

i think we all have that same thought, i know i do, so much i would touch up if i could

sorry accio.brain i thought i posted about yours last night lols i ended up putting it on facebook lols i really your piece, especially the opening, its structure was really good and i liked how the dialogue flowed it seemed naturally but philospohical (if you get what i mean). Overall i think...

yes i do its awesome, you get your characters apathy through and how she despises people and situations its really good

OMG so tranterisc. i thought the character was a man and then BAM a woman well done I love your piece especially the pieces called: indifference, evolution and exorcism

thanks the ending is my second favorite part. My favourite is bernies line "i don't swing that way buddy..." piss my self whenever i hear it I made my message tone lols thanks for commenting on my piano playing ( i did all of it, on the day lols )

no the austrain accent is my friend Tom, i'm the announcer. I took the lazy part. hahaha. EDIT: I'm the one with the bad acting

lols i love how tracking was still on :D, your teacher's comments or a friend?

if you'd like to hear i can email it through (mind you the recording is a bit iffy but meh, whats done is done)

Thanks, my teacher never saw the humour in it.

thanks, yeah i noticed the punctuation mistakes, but the spelling mistakes in the script at intentional hehe ( i made it well known in my journal).

don't worry i just found one that has really annoyed me (in the recording), oh well part and parcel of the course and proofreading.

DIAMETRIC: i love it espoecially the ending "The ice cracks beneath me. Splitting asunder, the water it embraces me. My feet are the first to go, their ethereal flame now steam in the wind. What power was this, and why, why had I never once been more… alive? Inviting a shower of drizzle, the...

actually that sounds like a good idea

Here is mine Medium: Radio Drama Title: Vampires + Bees = Comedy? if you would like to hear the sound file please pm and i'll be glad to email as i cannot upload anywhere for some unknown reason lols

sorry i loled so hard at this, cause the typo makes it sound so wrong lols.

i think thats what the person was asking (i think) if an annotated bibliography is required all together. Which is why i said yes, cause i was unsure and cause of how stupid my teacher is, I rung up and they told me every mw for ee2 requires some form of bibliography within the journal.

Our school is doing the trials now, we are nearing the end of the first week so your not alone. :type: <-- sorry just wanted to add the little guy HEHEHE :D

i don't do PD/H/PE but different subjects like to do things differently eg. in my geography essays they tell us to do things like that and past examples do the same. So you maybe should, really they can't mark you down for it, but really frown upon it so on the safe side if you do mark things...