I am not able to propose an exemplar way of wording things, just throwing ideas out there. This seems like a fun/useful exercise so I'll do some drafting around this since I'm meh at wording in a way that's easy to understand and I want to work on that.
"all stories are immortal / last forever...
HAHA i got this exact feedback on my first English Advanced Task (16/20 - "some excellent ideas in this piece, but a lack of cohesiveness and lapses in expression bring down the overall quality"...........................)
disclaimer: I have lost my task and I don't remember the exact wording...
11/12 Imaginative - Marker's feedback attached
8/8 Reflection - Didn't get any constructive criticism for reflection
This was a prepared and adapted response; I've typed up the adapted version. I don't usually prepare responses since I feel like it takes the fun out of the task but it seems to...
Now note that I am significantly more daft than the average person, so a lot of this might come off as common sense, but in case this might help anyone, here are my mistakes in my time during this course:
- I have always been a very disorganised person who procrastinates until the night...
MARKER'S FEEDBACK for this essay:
- Don't put so many details in the introduction. Leave DETAILS for BODY PARAGRAPHS.
- Try to develop a clearer thesis.
- Use more PERSUASIVE LANGUAGE to argue my points.
- Try to balance contextual claims with textual analysis
- Consider evaluating the...
I got into private school (typically ranking low 20s in the state) on a full academic scholarship and I can say this is probably not the norm because I am an embarrassment to all academic scholarship holders (and its a miracle my school has kept me) but I am definitely not going to get a top...
the answer is A according to my copy ?
edit: i'm dumb this is a different question lol i'm looking at Q2 of sydney girls trials which is the exact same but Question is sqrt 3/4
how did you go from sqrt3/4 to this?
edit: i'm dumb this is a different question lol i'm looking at Q2 of sydney girls trials which is the exact same but Question is sqrt 3/4
It's rather frustrating really but I'm someone who's used to studying last minute and retaining information just for 1 exam (and forgetting it quickly after) I studied for my trials in a week (going through maths in focus yr11/yr12 for 6 days then finished the nesa specimen paper in the last few...
Thanks a lot for the insight! I did feel that it was quite surprisingly easy, are there any particular challenging papers (with solutions) that you could recommend?
I did ok in trials and I'm studying a whole day more for the HSC but I feel like I just fluked trials and hsc will be way way harder :(
Edit: my dumb ass forgot to mention this is for maths ext 1 lol, and for trials I did the CSSA paper
3rd column is ranks.
And got a really low percentage,...I'm just aiming for average or above since 50% of my cohort tends to get a band 6. I think they average percentages and not ranks so with my super low mark for Task 3, do you guys think it's still possible to place average overall?
would you say that 4 unit english (by itself, excluding ext 1 and advanced) is more time consuming than your typical 2 unit subject? (like physics, economics)