from what I've heard from friends and hear say is this.
the 'good students' 90-92 hsc mark tend to rote learn memorise essays
from 93-95 the 'excellent' students tend towards having long prepared essays, but they have an extensive knowledge of their texts in regards to quotes, techniques...
i'm just gonna say.
rofl:
"yeah most schools should just stop acting like they have a serious case of unscheduled menstruation, and most schools arent like that"
Hi Ayo
it might not be your cup of tea but dance would do wonders, on a 1-2 classes a week basis, preferrably ballet/jazz: something of a technical nature.
Stretching can improve leg tone, as it strengthens muscle fibers as well as elongating connective tissue.
If you want to work on...
would aso recommend addressing the rubric (wording of the syllabus), and try integrating that into the introduction if you can, otherwise absolutezero's advice on format is spot on for the introduction, addressing rubric never loses you mark