Rubbish.
Prescriptions:
This module requires students to engage with and develop an informed personal understanding of their prescribed text. Through critical analysis and evaluation of its language, content and construction, students will develop an appreciation of the textual integrity of...
"There was a man standing on top of a tank. He was yelling orders in a foreign language."
"He came within a metre and was peering over the hill when the same voice that came at me from the helicopter come out of his radio."
So, he speaks in a foreign language and then speaks perfectly...
there will be 50,000 other kids doing belonging.\ and 20,000 other bleeding heart stories about childhood friends drifting away.
and there is just about nothing you can do to stop the examiner thinking, hey, i've read the same story 40 times today.
so get a better idea please
1. What's the title of your story? Folie á Plusieurs, or; The Madness of Many
2. What's the name of one of the main characters? Zephaniah
3. Is/are they guys/girls? Zephaniah is a Priest who happens to be Male. However there are men and women. Predominately men.
4. What is one...
My teacher advised me that the bits you think are your "gems" are the parts that you give the flick - Alcader is right - it will sharpen up as a whole.
But I'm operating at around 7500 =D
thankyou very much. add me on msn if you want to read it. i took it down off deviantart because it pulled something like 200 views and meanwhile about 3 people commented on it; sure, there might have just been people who didn't touch it, but getting that kind of attention drawn to it spooked me...
well if anyone asks to plagarise it, i have more than sufficient proof to say that i was the one writing it. but ok. i'll take it down.
from my report:
My major work, ‘Folie à Plusieurs, or; The Madness of Many’, examines religion as a societal force in modern Australian society...
And I would really rather like it if you good people could read my Major Work and pick it to pieces.
Folie a Plusieurs. EX2. by ~ExplodingDog on deviantART
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