Originally posted by ToOhEyZ
yeah standard is pretty hard. i think the average at my skool is like 60% or something.
its really hard for english standard to get a band 6 or 5.
hey,
at least it is not as bad in an all-boys college!
(we must have girls on our minds all day, everyday
)
the average for the *ADVANCED* course was 62% during the preliminary year.
it is pretty hard to get a band 5/6 in adv eng, but it is not impossible
*whistles, cough*
anyway winston,
here's what you should try to do,
even if it doesn't make sense.
read a couple of essays,
have your teacher mark them,
see where you've gone wrong,
if that doesn't help, try scaffolding.
introduction,
body,
conclusion
in your body, select a text, develop ideas,
introduce techniques, quote, reiterate these techniques.
just ask yourself,
what are you trying to say,
how will you go about saying it,
when you want to say it,
after you've said it,
tie it all together,
re-state what you've said,
link it back to the introduction,
and the conclusion is self-explanatory;
wrap it up, don't introduce anything new,
sum up your essay/points and that should be it