Aos paper one qn help (1 Viewer)

[forthehsc]

I was wondering what people would write for this question

Text three – Poem

Virtual Worlds

I Xist Bcoz I thnk I do
Nt nDpndntly of U
I am wot U C
I am wot I feel
Ths mch is tru n th wrld tht is rl
Bt n cybrspce
I cn dict8 who 2 B
I'm n ctrl of
vrtul me

Text three – Poem
(d) Explain what the sense of connection in the poem? 2
(e) Comment on the language used to shape your understanding of the 2
poem as a whole?

 

[Galladrim]

That is seriously a text?

I have no clue what its saying, since I can't read it.

 

[brettymaccc]

Apparently so...

http://www.google.com.au/url?sa=t&s...8jqpKBc-Q&sig2=xrFUHdXzB0kZ9pLwB_CylQ&cad=rja

 

[HyperComplexxx]

d. COnnection to the cyber world, through the writing style

 

[aphorae]

I was wondering what people would write for this question

Text three – Poem

Virtual Worlds

I Xist Bcoz I thnk I do
Nt nDpndntly of U
I am wot U C
I am wot I feel
Ths mch is tru n th wrld tht is rl
Bt n cybrspce
I cn dict8 who 2 B
I'm n ctrl of
vrtul me

Text three – Poem
(d) Explain what the sense of connection in the poem? 2
(e) Comment on the language used to shape your understanding of the 2
poem as a whole?

I exist because I think I do
Not independently of you
I am what you see
I am what I feel
This much is true in the world that is real
But in cyberspace
I can dictate who to be
I'm in control of me
Virtual me

Yeah is it sad that I was easily able to read it?

I would probably say the abbreviated language typically associated with internet messaging indicates a connection to the virtual world, or an expression of belonging to such a world. It also suggests that whereas in the real world we are defined by our characteristics or social constraints, in the virtual world we have complete control of our identity and can shape ourselves in whatever way we want to; indicates varying perceptions of belonging and contrasting notions of identity. Repetition of the first person and juxtaposition with second person shows the strong sense of self - especially with the emphatic placement of I at the start of multiple lines. The use of rhyme creates a sense of balance. etc.

 

[Omnipotence]

Yeah, it was in a past HSC paper.

 

[forthehsc]

http://api.viglink.com/api/click?fo...&cad=rja&jsonp=vglnk_jsonp_13188133060752

what about text two in that?

 

[aphorae]

Connection with the land is already given. So just something about the focal point of the bare foot, the natural elements of the photo i.e. the sand, and how the feet are framed by those natural elements/sinking of the foot into the sand indicating one's identity being shaped by surrounding elements of nature/the connection with the land.

 

[Effekt]

http://api.viglink.com/api/click?fo...&cad=rja&jsonp=vglnk_jsonp_13188133060752

what about text two in that?

The bare feet and 'beach' environment could also suggest he might be a refugee or someone who has come from a less advantaged country where he didn't belong.