belonging poem (1 Viewer)

[nizz_bizz]

could smoeone help me analyse this poem and tell me if its a good related text for strictly ballroom

I NEVER BELONG

I NEVER BELONGED HERE
ALOT OF US NEVER DID
OUR FACES AREN'T REAL
THEY'RE WALLS WE HIDE BEHIND
WE DON'T BELONG HERE
WE JUST WATCH THE REST
OBSERVE TO SEE HOW TO ACT
WE DON'T BELONG HERE
BUT YOU WOULD NEVER GUESS
HOW MANY OF US WALK AMONG YOU

 

[KingOfActing]

It's far too late for me to do any analysis right now, but it seems a bit basic to me. If you want a good poem for Belonging maybe Ozymandias?

 

[Absolutezero]

That was a piece written for someone's creative writing class. I recommend you pick something more substantial.

 

[nizz_bizz]

any suggestions

 

[Absolutezero]

any suggestions

Yes.

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