Belonging Speech (1 Viewer)

[hollyaaaa]

hi, could someone please give me feedback on my belonging speech, im really nervous for it haha

its on the "struggle to belong is a significant part of our lives" and we were to do it on a related text ( i chose 'Does My Head Look Big In This') and 'Romulus My Father', the speech is to be 5 minutes with only one minute dedicated to Romulus

thanks in advance x

 

[tigerian]

see your private mail

 

[Rockmelt]

If 'Romulus' is your prescribed text, unless you have been told otherwise by your guidelines/teacher, it should probably take up a little more than 1/5th of your speech?

For my Speech, prescribed had to be a minimum of 60%.

 

[lucycahir]

Hey If i could check it out thatd be great

 

[riley_1133]

Ill be happy to have a look and give some advice

 

[gwilymprice]

Yeah I'd be happy to help as well, loved Romulus!
Send me a PM if you like

 

[Essay Questions]

Hey i just did a similar assesment task, shoot me a PM and ill give ya some feedback.

 

[obliviousninja]

Yes. I am willing.