sonny_angel520
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- 2025
Dude 1984 is like a toxic relationship... I hate studying for it but I can’t stop because I’m so pedanticwhat feedback has your teacher given in trials on the essay? if it was more about not relating to the question, i dont think the essay is the problem, but rather practice adapting it to a variety of practice questions. if the feedback was on the actual analysis, you would need to refine that and then follow a similar study appraoch of practicing to adapt it.
bruh i wish my school did 1984! we literally do vertigo which i have genuinly not heard of any other school doing and there are like no online resources on it!
My teacher’s feedback was that I retell too much and don’t cover audience, context and purpose enough. additionally i need to analyse form more comprehensively (which is really hard for 1984 because Orwell gives us FKN NOTHING). So my analysis is pretty weak I guess. I just brainstormed a bunch of my thoughts and organised them, so I now have a more organised plan to analyse the essay. I have 4 body paragraphs about diff ideas and maybe I’ll try to analyse and assemble them in a way that fits whatever question.
I struggle to look at my old pre-prepped essay bc its so bad but now I think I can rewrite a better one and hope the HSC question fits what I have??