theres so much worse. i just would totally get banned if i sent that kinda stuff on the english advanced 2025 forumWtf
There should be mandatory ethics classes in some of these schools bc wtf am I reading

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theres so much worse. i just would totally get banned if i sent that kinda stuff on the english advanced 2025 forumWtf
There should be mandatory ethics classes in some of these schools bc wtf am I reading
yeah its just a different text but we had the same questionoh wait we have different texts lol. was the question similar tho, mine said "how does the closing stanza of the poem (extract provided) offer effective resolutions to the tensions in the poem"
wait i also used a quote from magi in the 2nd para but it wasn't from the extract, does that count?Lol I think ik what Iโm talking about. If you look at the 2021 exemplars they answered the question throughout their essay and constantly linked back w the extract, I know there wasnโt enough evidence from the closing of magi so you couldโve used quotes youโve memorised and context in another paragraph which would further support your thesis but having one seperate para is not sufficient enough to secure a b6 my teacher says it all the time
they also showed so much support to one austrian painter from the 1930s who got rejected from art school... so wholesome supporting for the underdogtheres so much worse. i just would totally get banned if i sent that kinda stuff on the english advanced 2025 forum![]()
Yea but theyโre different questions and are articulated differentlyLol I think ik what Iโm talking about. If you look at the 2021 exemplars they answered the question throughout their essay and constantly linked back w the extract, I know there wasnโt enough evidence from the closing of magi so you couldโve used quotes youโve memorised and context in another paragraph which would further support your thesis but having one seperate para is not sufficient enough to secure a b6 my teacher says it all the time
me when im born into extremely fortunate circumstances so i have to be really flipping weird to cancel it outthey also showed so much support to one austrian painter from the 1930s who got rejected from art school... so wholesome supporting for the underdog![]()
make this mandatory instead of english. UCAT ethics section returns to claim more victimsImagine a hsc subject on ethics and morals, and you are examined on how you would react to certain situation, maybe even a verbal/practical situation. Those rich kids that have no jobs and don't go outside don't know how to treat people, and the boundaries between right and wrong.
Yea I used magi a lot (describing how it started, progressed, ended) and coupled it with hollow men I think anything that uses magi and is justified as building up to the conclusion can work (but Iโm not a marker, just my opinion)wait i also used a quote from magi in the 2nd para but it wasn't from the extract, does that count?
also the 2021 question was specifically "how do the extracts contribute to textual conversations" so its more extract focused, but our question kind of wants you to explore both the tensions and the extract
i think you are completely fine because im sure theres many people who used it conssitently throughout their essay without ever going into depth on what even the tension is, you demonstrated deep understanding by also showing what the tension is not just slapping it somewhere it doesnt fitwait i also used a quote from magi in the 2nd para but it wasn't from the extract, does that count?
also the 2021 question was specifically "how do the extracts contribute to textual conversations" so its more extract focused, but our question kind of wants you to explore both the tensions and the extract
not even weird, just straight up reverse flash level hate for those who dont come from the same background or have the same skin colourme when im born into extremely fortunate circumstances so i have to be really flipping weird to cancel it out
Yea without a good understanding of the tension you canโt be awarded super high marksi think you are completely fine because im sure theres many people who used it conssitently throughout their essay without ever going into depth on what even the tension is, you demonstrated deep understanding by also showing what the tension is not just slapping it somewhere it doesnt fit
yeah anything at all from magi counts, I do think for this essay question we had to be very specific and constantly compare to show how in magi Eliot overcame the tensions and it was an effective resolution.. It was definitely harder than the hollow men extract given previously.wait i also used a quote from magi in the 2nd para but it wasn't from the extract, does that count?
also the 2021 question was specifically "how do the extracts contribute to textual conversations" so its more extract focused, but our question kind of wants you to explore both the tensions and the extract
if u are one hue darker than #FFFFFF and walk too close to a knox student they might scream "DADDY! ILLEGAL! KILL IT NOW!!"not even weird, just straight up reverse flash level hate for those who dont come from the same background or have the same skin colour
and gender bc they seem to have never met a single girl in their life (besides their mothersnot even weird, just straight up reverse flash level hate for those who dont come from the same background or have the same skin colour
agreedI think it could have been read as a progression v effectively
i feel a good amount of them also havent met their mothersand gender bc they seem to have never met a single girl in their life (besides their mothers)
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Also if you ever doubting i remember in trials they asked for ladybird and one other poem and i did 3 and only ladybird in one para and somehow got 18/20 so maybe markers arent as harsh as u think they arei think you are completely fine because im sure theres many people who used it conssitently throughout their essay without ever going into depth on what even the tension is, you demonstrated deep understanding by also showing what the tension is not just slapping it somewhere it doesnt fit
and they'll be the same people who take up jobs as doctors and politicians and lawyers and whatnot. such hypocrisyif u are one hue darker than #FFFFFF and walk too close to a knox student they might scream "DADDY! ILLEGAL! KILL IT NOW!!"
#1 law is to keep the rich in powerand they'll be the same people who take up jobs as doctors and politicians and lawyers and whatnot. such hypocrisy