Creative writing thoughts? (1 Viewer)

[jess_1495]

Id love to share my creative writing with some one, or a few people. My teacher said the idea was stupid and predictable, but my tutor said it was genius. Can anyone who would be interested in reading it private message me, or reply to this thread. I also wrote nearly this identical story in the exam. Thanks

 

[JT145]

I'll read it sure

 

[obliviousninja]

I'll read it sure

This kid steals ideas, so I would advise not giving it to him. He is gonna use it for his extension 1 creative, then you two will be caught by the board.
Say hello to tafe

 

[jess_1495]

This kid steals ideas, so I would advise not giving it to him. He is gonna use it for his extension 1 creative, then you two will be caught by the board.

Really?

 

[Absolutezero]

I can take a look at it if you want.

 

[Spiritual Being]

I can take a look at it if you want.

This guy, he's a God.

He gave me invaluable advice and suggestions, and a 15/15 is only around the corner come results time.

 

[Amaranth_]

I can have a read of it while I procrastinate Modern history if you like.

 

[QZP]

I was thoroughly confused until I gradually uncovered who the persona narrating was :L Not my cup of tea though... Someone give this is a mark/15 ! I'm bad at judging :S

 

[jess_1495]

I was thoroughly confused until I gradually uncovered who the persona narrating was :L Not my cup of tea though... Someone give this is a mark/15 ! I'm bad at judging :S

I dont want a mark, just wanted thoughts. English is simply a form of ones opinion, hence why a lot have loved it while the minority haven't. All good though, everyone is entitled to their own opinion.

 

[Spiritual Being]

skr3w u @ll

her cr3@tive was @w3sum3

 

[fionarykim]

id love to read it too!
creative the only part i enjoy about english
the rest is okay i guess.. haha

 

[jess_1495]

id love to read it too!
creative the only part i enjoy about english
the rest is okay i guess.. haha

I'm a bit reluctant now from the few people who critiqued it negatively haha.

 

[Absolutezero]

I'm a bit reluctant now from the few people who critiqued it negatively haha.

I think I was pretty balanced.

 

[jess_1495]

I think I was pretty balanced.

Oh of course, so much positivity. Nah, doesn't bother me haha. Nothing I can change about it, just was after a kinda "its good" or "it sucks", seeing as though I've already written it.

 

[Absolutezero]

Oh of course, so much positivity. Nah, doesn't bother me haha. Nothing I can change about it, just was after a kinda "its good" or "it sucks", seeing as though I've already written it.

It gives you something for consideration for future stories though, which is always good to have.

 

[jess_1495]

It gives you something for consideration for future stories though, which is always good to have.

Always,

 

[CM07]

I can read it as well. I had a similar situation except the other way around (my tutor didn't like it but my teacher did) haha. Hoping for a marker who likes it.