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[mtsmahia]

This is the conclusion of my speech

Both Shakespeare's ...... and ........... therefore support the notion that belonging encourages one's self-actualisation and can enrich our identity and relationships, giving one the inner-capacity to accept and understand others

does the part in bold fit in alright and make sense?

 

[mtsmahia]

please someone reply, its due tomorrow

 

[Jeee]

Try this instead, I've edited little bits:

Shakespeare's x and y support the notion that belonging encourages self-actualisation and can enrich relationships and our identity, allowing humans the ability to accept and understand others.

 

[mtsmahia]

Try this instead, I've edited little bits:

Shakespeare's x and y support the notion that belonging encourages self-actualisation and can enrich relationships and our identity, allowing humans the ability to accept and understand others.

ohh.. do you have any words other than ability- ive already used it a lot in my speech

 

[Jeee]

You could try capability, or strength.