English Creative writing (1 Viewer)

[tomp1612]

Hey I have written a short story (creative for paper 1) if I could PM it to you could you tell me if it relates to belonging??

 

[RishBonjour]

Hey I have written a short story (creative for paper 1) if I could PM it to you could you tell me if it relates to belonging??

do you think it does?
You don't have to abuse the concept, as long as your story has some aspects of belonging in it (which its generally bound to have) it should be fine.
However, try and make it cover a few belonging concepts because trust me, BOS will fk with your creative (and ultimately your hsc)

 

[tomp1612]

do you think it does?
You don't have to abuse the concept, as long as your story has some aspects of belonging in it (which its generally bound to have) it should be fine.
However, try and make it cover a few belonging concepts because trust me, BOS will fk with your creative (and ultimately your hsc)

it sort of conveys it but it doesnt necessarily say this person doesnt feel like they belong

 

[Zeroes]

I think conveying it subtly is better than blasting it in the examiner's face.

 

[tomp1612]

I think conveying it subtly is better than blasting it in the examiner's face.

sweet thats exactly the way my creative piece goes thanks for the advice

 

[deswa1]

Yeah definitely subtle is better than "I didn't belong". Personally, I don't have the word belonging at all in my creative and I know a lot of teachers recommend that as well

 

[LoveHateSchool]

Send me a PM, I'll tell you if I think the belonging is there enough but not too in your face

 

[RishBonjour]

Yeah definitely subtle is better than "I didn't belong". Personally, I don't have the word belonging at all in my creative and I know a lot of teachers recommend that as well

I did a shifty creative for my trials
everything was good but i trolled and said
"where we belonged" teacher circled it lol.

 

[onedaysnotice]

Hahaha the dux of my school can't write narratives well, and he had the word 'belong' in like every 3rd sentence xD.

 

[OMGITzJustin]

Hahaha the dux of my school can't write narratives well, and he had the word 'belong' in like every 3rd sentence xD.

LOL, which is why I see you're first in english hahahahaha

 

[onedaysnotice]

LOL, which is why I see you're first in english hahahahaha

xD it's just that he has a mathematical and methodical brain. He's seriously got photographic memory and he's amazing at working systematically, which is why he's first in math, mx1, physics, chem, business and sor1

But unfortunately for him, those abilities aren't necessarily useful in english, especially for creatives lolololol.

 

[tomp1612]

Send me a PM, I'll tell you if I think the belonging is there enough but not too in your face

I Pm'ed u