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Feedback on my essay? (1 Viewer)

megurem

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So my teacher won't be able to properly mark and give feedback on my essay till' next Thursday, so I thought I might as well post it here and take my chances here meanwhile.

The essay question is "To what extent was the Huaihai campaign the turning point of the Chinese Civil War?"

Any feedback and criticism is appreciated. Thanks in advance!
 

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Saxtoni

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It is high quality and interesting. You're great.
 
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