Harry Lavender - Talking about this text within an essay, is this Okay? :O (1 Viewer)

[Mannilie]

Hello all,
In the past, I have written essays on Distinctive Voices for Module A using a unique system/format. Compared to the others, this one stands out over the rest. Here are the following two reasons why I think it is different:

- When talking about Harry Lavender and my related texts and comparing them, I refer to each of the characters as "the voice".
- When linking the voice with the question (from both texts, related and prescribed) I tend to answer the question using a "closing statement" or "end of body paragraph" (whatever you call it) and mention the voice there.

Are both of these "rituals" correct when answering the question? I thought perhaps it's a bit too repetitive of me.

Cheers,
Manny.

 

[kpopism]

yeah i think it is correct, i do the sort of the same thing but mine is always within the same paragraph
if that makes sense. if you did well in your trials using that method then im sure it would work.
surely your teachers would tell you if it was wrong haha
btw, how many related texts are you going in with?