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eh yeah...but then it would be privy to the public (which means everyone!), and then everyone would see how bad my essay is...plus, i'd rather people critised it on email so that any embarassing comments would be for my eyes only...
riviet does that mean you want to read it?? is there anyone who wants to read it at all?? i'm sure its a lot of *cough* fun...
riviet does that mean you want to read it?? is there anyone who wants to read it at all?? i'm sure its a lot of *cough* fun...
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Hey, i am up for helping you with ur economics essays. Email me at Cheeky_Bub4life@msn and i will help you! Cheers! 
yeah email me at redjelly_baby@hotmail.com and I'll have a looksee
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"Interest rate rises has dampened the demand for goods and services, causing a small fall in inflation from 4% to 3% of GDP."
I thought inflation is measured by the change in the CPI, and not as a percentage of GDP?
"because of an increase in interest rates in a contractionary monetary policy, some unemployment might occur "
Put in a Phillip's Curve!!
"External stability is the ability of exports to pay for imports"
Isn't that more like Terms of Trade? External stability is our ability to carry out international transaction with the rest of the world without serious fluctuations to the currency.
Sorry to be picking out bits and pieces x_x Didn't know how else to comment. Anyway, I think it's pretty good! Maybe put in more of the current stats. The cash rate is now 6% because of two rate rises this year in May and August etc. Prices of bananas and petrol etc.
I thought inflation is measured by the change in the CPI, and not as a percentage of GDP?
"because of an increase in interest rates in a contractionary monetary policy, some unemployment might occur "
Put in a Phillip's Curve!!
"External stability is the ability of exports to pay for imports"
Isn't that more like Terms of Trade? External stability is our ability to carry out international transaction with the rest of the world without serious fluctuations to the currency.
Sorry to be picking out bits and pieces x_x Didn't know how else to comment. Anyway, I think it's pretty good! Maybe put in more of the current stats. The cash rate is now 6% because of two rate rises this year in May and August etc. Prices of bananas and petrol etc.
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^ wow... lots of comments... i don't know what to say... i should start with thanks though - for taking the time to read this essay. I already knew I should fix up the plan. I really have no idea how to structure essays though, can anyone help me with this?
I've revised monetary policy again, and will incorporate these comments into my learning although i kinda don't understand some of them...
grnlies, do you really think its worth 12? my teacher is a strict hsc marker, and she gave it 16. AND she doesnt like me. Arggh!!! now i'm starting to panic!! are hsc markers that strict???? as economics isnt exactly my best subject.
PS: i got the government + monetary policy thingo from Tim Riley's textbook:
"monetary policy is used by the federal government as a 'swing instrument'..."
does this mean its wrong???
Edited to add: oh yeah, on reflection, I remember in the trials i misread the question as impact on external stability not economic stability, so I neglected internal stability.
I've revised monetary policy again, and will incorporate these comments into my learning although i kinda don't understand some of them...
grnlies, do you really think its worth 12? my teacher is a strict hsc marker, and she gave it 16. AND she doesnt like me. Arggh!!! now i'm starting to panic!! are hsc markers that strict???? as economics isnt exactly my best subject.
PS: i got the government + monetary policy thingo from Tim Riley's textbook:
"monetary policy is used by the federal government as a 'swing instrument'..."
does this mean its wrong???
Edited to add: oh yeah, on reflection, I remember in the trials i misread the question as impact on external stability not economic stability, so I neglected internal stability.
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Yeah tim riley is wrong.
In fact im very surprised he's left that in. He's had 10 years to edit it out.
As far as 12.
Dont worry, as far as HSC markers go, they will mark easier - but its hard to say because no-one ever see's their results. Nonetheless there are standards packages available and I would think that your appropriate mark would be between 12 and 16.
But its better to be a strict marker and fix problems rather than letting mistakes through.
In fact im very surprised he's left that in. He's had 10 years to edit it out.
As far as 12.
Dont worry, as far as HSC markers go, they will mark easier - but its hard to say because no-one ever see's their results. Nonetheless there are standards packages available and I would think that your appropriate mark would be between 12 and 16.
But its better to be a strict marker and fix problems rather than letting mistakes through.
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Just trust ur teacher, a high school teacher marks differently from a uni professor.