i have to write a similar essay on af and crucible
i have to do study animal farm and the crucible for yr 11 prelims this year and i have to go in and write an essay tomorrow. the half yearly exam essay question was to compare the two stories
u have to talk about symbolism of how the crucible is used as a symbol for the court, which is supposd to purify the town as the crucible does to metals. Also write about all the charcater and who they are all suposed to stand for (ie girls stand for senator J McCarthy) In AF write who the cahracters stand for stalin/ napoleon, snowball/trotsky, the dogs/stalin's secret police.
when you talk of power talk about how when you have too much power u abuse it when senator mcCarthy had power all he did was want to keep it and hurt people with it, thats the same with the crucibel wehn the girls ahd power over all the towns people, all they did was blame people they didnt like (ie Abigail with Elizabeth proctor). in AF the pigs had too much power which was abused especially towards the end which is evident also in the russian revolution when Stalin abused his high position and social status to his own advantage and not that for what socialism stands for. he even made historians and authors of textbooks re write history to make it seem that he had a bigger role then he really did.
remeber its quality not quantity and, make sure u write a plan before u start the essay so you dunt have ur ideas all jumbled up and not in any particular order.
heres one u might want to use
Intro
af and c show power in many ways etc. (introduce ur ideas, dont write naything in ur essay thats not in ur intro)
body
1. abuse of power in c
2. abuse of power in af
3. symbolism and who abuses power in c
4. symbolism and who abuses power in af
conclusion
sim. to intro but rephrase (for eg therfore in conclusion af and c have many instances where the cahracters are shown to use or misuse power...)